Friendship · Repair · Honesty

The Apology That Took Three Tries

"Sorry you're upset" is not an apology, and both of them know it.

Age range
Ages 5-9
Reading time
6 minutes
Category
Friendship stories
Illustration of two children laughing under one umbrella on a rainy playground

What happens

After breaking his friend's model, a boy attempts three apologies. The first blames the model, the second blames his friend, and the third finally says the thing he has been avoiding. A script children can actually reuse.

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The first one came out on the walk home, fast, aimed at the pavement. "Sorry, but it was already wobbly."

Kofi did not answer. The model had taken him eleven days and it had not been wobbly.

The second one arrived at the school gate the next morning: "Sorry you got upset about it." This one was worse, and Rowan knew it was worse before he had finished saying it.

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Why this one is worth your time

  • Explicitly models the difference between a non-apology and a real one.
  • Gives your child language they can borrow verbatim.
  • Short enough to read the evening after a playground fallout.

Talk about it afterward

  • What was wrong with the first two apologies?
  • What does a real sorry sound like?

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